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Timestamp	Since previous	Game		NoniGirl's comment
Oct 8 05:25:43		Skyfall	♥ 1	Thank you for your submission! I had a blast playing your game, and my high score was 53,436. The music is absolutely fantastic—it really sets the mood and enhances the overall experience! I also really liked the concept of the game. However, I have to admit that during the first few minutes, I was a bit unsure of what I was supposed to do, even after reading the instructions. It might help to include a brief in-game tutorial in the future to ease players into the mechanics. Overall, though, this is a really strong submission—great job!
Oct 8 05:44:30	18m 47s	Paco's Quest	♥ 2	First off, an amazing submission! I spent quite a bit of time testing your game extensively, and I have to say—innovation at its best! I thoroughly enjoyed the game concept from start to finish. With the addition of a few more animations and some polished sound design, I could definitely see this becoming a fun online game—perfect for playing on the side during class! For anyone feeling a bit lost at the beginning: the game gets easier the longer you play, especially as you unlock more tiny creatures. Here are a few feedback points I'd like to share: The info for the coin automat should be displayed above the trees, otherwise, it’s hard to read. Provide clearer information about how and when you receive damage. It might be a good idea to allow players to freely decide the order in which they insert items. After unlocking a creature, it would be nice if the third required ingredient were visible under "C". Thanks again for your game! I’m off to keep playing now! EDIT: got them all. you CAN choose the sequence of your ingredients.
Oct 8 06:17:50	33m 20s	Molly the Mole	♥ 1	Thank you for your submission! First off: I saved Molly and her kids! The game has a very fitting mood and atmosphere that really drew me in. I have a small suggestion regarding the worms — maybe make them a bit pinker so they stand out more. In exchange, you could add more enemies to increase the challenge a bit. The sound design is also fantastic—really well done!
Oct 8 06:28:58	11m 08s	Ludum Dare 56 - Hamster Hoarder	♥ 3	Thank you for your submission! I really enjoyed the animations in the hamster cage—watching everything scurry around was a lot of fun! The music is also well-chosen and adds to the atmosphere. It would be great if the player could move a bit faster or have a sprint option. Also, making the intro on the PC skippable would be a nice improvement, as it got a bit frustrating having to click through all the text again when pressing "E" on the PC while exploring.
Oct 8 07:08:25	39m 27s	Familiar Bones	♥ 2	Thank you for your submission! OMG, I absolutely love the look of your game! Creating such a sense of space using just black and white is really impressive! And I adore the animation of the cat—it’s especially well done when you press "E." Unfortunately, I got stuck at one point... when I pressed "E" to dismiss the text, it triggered the text again, and I couldn’t progress. Do you have any tips on how to get past that? I’d love to keep playing! pic.jpg
Oct 8 07:15:41	7m 16s	Last Lump Of Coal	♥ 1	Thank you for your submission! I really love the art style — it’s very well done! However, I had some trouble understanding how the employees move in and out, or where they are supposed to be, even after reading the instructions. Unfortunately, I couldn’t quite grasp that part. Personally, I would also suggest adjusting the speed of the train so that the next round starts a bit faster. PS: You should maybe opt out Audio because there was none when i played
Oct 8 07:20:53	5m 12s	Love Dance	♥ 5	Thank you for your amazing submission! The art style is really well done, and a special shoutout to LexArtis for the fantastic musical score—it truly adds to the experience! Oh, and by the way... my birds fell in love!
Oct 8 07:30:40	9m 47s	Akinned	♥ 1	Thank you for your strong submission! I really like the idea behind your topic and theme for this game! The questions at the beginning of Whoosh were especially intriguing and really got me thinking — especially as a more melancholic, philosophical person. The music design was also on point!
Oct 8 07:38:10	7m 30s	Spider-Meow	♥ 2	Thank you for your really great submission! I absolutely love cat-themed games! I also enjoy how seemingly "creepy" or "evil" creatures are made to look cute. I found the controls a bit tricky at first, but you do get the hang of it. The humor in the graphics is fantastic! And let’s not forget that the "M" button is extremely important! I particularly enjoyed the scene with the red spider and the hearts, but unfortunately, I ended up back at the beginning of the level sequence after that, even though I saw the “Level 1 Completed” screen.
Oct 13 14:36:29	126h 58m	build_a_dready_bear.swf	♥ 1	Thank you for your great submission! It’s hard to believe you managed to create this in just 3 days! I really like the "build-a-bear" concept—it’s super creative. I’d love to see more feedback when completing or missing a task—maybe a points system or something similar? The sound effects are also really well done!
Oct 13 14:46:54	10m 25s	Happy Bees	♥ 1	Thank you for your really great submission! The graphics and animations of the bees are absolutely adorable! I also found the game really fun to play—my high score was 36 honey. Adding some sound would definitely enhance the experience even more!
Oct 13 14:59:42	12m 48s	Autopsy Center Simulator	♥ 1	Thank you for your really great submission! This is honestly one of the strongest entries I've played so far in this LD Jam. As a big fan of medicine and anatomy, I think that’s part of why I enjoyed it so much. The organ graphics are really well done, and the atmosphere, combined with the music, fits perfectly. Unfortunately, I personally found it a bit too difficult... I couldn’t complete an autopsy, even though I played for quite a while. Still, it was a really great experience!