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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Polite Stories's comment | |
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| Oct 8 18:20:27 | Introvertigo | ♥ 4 | I really loved this, every little detail pushed how uncomfortable and oppressive atmosphere is when you're trapped in a conversation with a stranger. I loved the unusual skin tones and how the screen felt like it was closing in on you, the only think I could even think to improve on this would be slightly more intense music the closer they got to you but I genuinely really loved this! Thanks for posting :) | |
| Oct 8 18:29:45 | 9m 18s | Before The Trip | ♥ 2 | Lovely little entry, something I could see myself playing on the way to work on my phone! The art is charming and works so well for what it is, my only little request would be maybe it could tell you what the item is specifically when you highlight over it? I was looking for certain kinds of makeup completely puzzled to which ones were right or not and having to try tossing them in to see if it would flag, I think it could be cute to not only have different types of holiday but maybe different lugagge types if you continued forward and made this a full title :) thanks for uploading |
| Oct 8 18:48:13 | 18m 28s | Caveat Exemplum Optimus | ♥ 2 | You have made a really intense and frightening atmosphere here, the constant need to eat and consume is a always overshadowing you and you have some really easy to read writing, nothing too wordy or obtuse that it's difficult to read in one sitting. I liked what I personally took away to be the overall message too, that those who feed off of human suffering and exploit those under them with greed will never truly be satisfied and they comparable to monsters. I am also really happy to see someone else who created a whole narrative experience, I do genuinely love games like this and it's really sad that sometimes the feedback we get aren't really helpful for the kinds of games we create such as "too many words" or "where are the graphics" or, my absolute least favourite "TLDR" it just plain sucks, game jams at platforms for improvement and... those things are just not that. Please keep on doing this kind of thing, it makes ludum dare a much more interesting and diverse place! |
| Oct 8 18:56:19 | 8m 06s | Bucket Buffet | ♥ 2 | Extremely polished ESPECIALLY for a game jam submission, I can tell that whoever was drawing the food was really enjoying themselves too since like look fantastic, a very unqiue and fun idea that you pulled off excellently |
| Oct 8 21:48:45 | 2h 52m | InvenStory | ♥ 3 | I've seen a few inventory management games this time around but man the polish here is lovely, I know it's a minor detail but the sop background in particular is such a feast for the eyes, I think some sound effects when you place something down could help with the gameplay feeling responsive? But that may as well be my only complaint, I adored the writing, the difficulity, and especially the art |
| Oct 8 22:03:47 | 15m 02s | Burn Beetle | ♥ 2 | Very cute premise and, while it is small in scope, I think that was sensible since the amount of polish is really impressive. The vfx, the audio and the art help the gamplay feel satisfying! and the ladybug controls perfectly. Lovely! |
| Oct 8 22:07:20 | 3m 33s | River City Transit | ♥ 1 | When I saw the Joker on the bus I literally lost it, fun idea and the face mask on the player character exclusively just really sells it. We've all been there |
| Oct 8 22:17:08 | 9m 48s | CrystalLine | ♥ 0 | Very unique idea, feels like the kind of game you'd say "I'm only gonna play for one more hour" then end up spending the next five obsessive playing. If you wanted to take this further I think special items or uniquely shaped gameplay screesn would be really cool! |
| Oct 8 22:24:28 | 7m 20s | Beach Time! | ♥ 0 | Extremely charming graphics, I found the logic behind the weapons to be a little bizzare but that honestly just added to the charm |
| Oct 8 22:30:32 | 6m 04s | 宇宙列車 -SPACE EXPRESS- | ♥ 0 | I'm really into danmaku titles so seeing "inspired by touhou" really got me excited and I'm so glad I tried, your UI is absolutely crazy and I love it so much! The music is genuinely weird but fits in so well with the overal vibe of the game, if I was to offer feedback I would probably say that something like a sound effect or a visual indication you're actually hitting the target would go a long way to add into that satisfying gameplay loop, like for example in some of the touhou games the character sprites do that little minor flash? JUst a suggestion and I really loved it anyway |
| Oct 9 13:05:02 | 14h 34m | Picky Plants | ♥ 0 | Nice and soothing game, scratches that smae itch as something like solitaire or organising a messy drawer. I think the pixel art is lovely and the music helps out with the already relaxing mood |