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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | JP Design's comment | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| May 3 03:42:37 | Lil' Red Witch | ♥ 2 | Extremely cute and very polished, and a satisfying and game loop. Controls have a bit of a learning curve, but I think they are fairly well executed. Just add more content (Potions, Cities, etc) and you'll have a nice commercial game on your hands! | |
| May 3 03:50:38 | 8m 01s | Delivery Boy | ♥ 2 | Simple and addictive, I love it! Just add some form of player progression and i'll buy this game in a heartbeat! |
| May 3 04:18:05 | 27m 27s | Package Panik | ♥ 5 | Oh man! This almost feels like a full game! Can't believe it's a jam entry. My only suggestion is more comprehensive tutorial, and better communicate to the player they are placed on a good or bad part of the map |
| May 3 04:22:00 | 3m 55s | You Got Mail! | ♥ 2 | Simple but effective, now this game will live in my phone forever (Unless you make an expanded version, then i'll change it in a blink of an eye) |
| May 3 04:26:58 | 4m 58s | Grav Garb | ♥ 4 | Great game overall, just a few upgrades away from being a full commercial game. But i'm still little confused about the design of the ship, it feels backwards (perhaps a more animal inspired design might help?) |
| May 3 04:44:25 | 17m 27s | D1D1's Delivery Service | ♥ 1 | It has a charming concept and it shows a lot of potential! (Physics challenge or planing based puzzles perhaps?) I hope your doing well, and wish you succeed whether you continue this project or not |
| May 3 04:47:08 | 2m 43s | Dondo | ♥ 0 | I Hope you do well (Maybe upload it as Extra?) |
| May 3 04:51:40 | 4m 32s | Astacus Mechanicus | ♥ 2 | Can't play it, sorry :/ Untitled.png By looking at the assets, it look like a nice little game |
| May 3 04:59:30 | 7m 50s | FastData | ♥ 1 | Simple and stylish with that Retrowave vibe, could see myself playing it on my phone from time to time. Maybe adding a leaderboard or other multiplayer components |
| May 3 05:13:03 | 13m 33s | QWOPcopter | ♥ 3 | Painful and frustrating, but in a good way, just like QWOP! My satisfaction is measurable and my day is ruined. Great job. |
| May 3 05:15:30 | 2m 27s | Libre | ♥ 1 | Sounds Interesting, I'll be patiently waiting |
| May 3 05:25:11 | 9m 41s | Astro-Web Deliveries | ♥ 2 | Simple and fun concept, wish I could see it developed further, perhaps some enemies or other obstacles. Controls have a nice arcadey feel. |
| May 3 05:31:09 | 5m 58s | Star Shipper | ♥ 2 | It feels very early, but I believe this has some potential. A delivery company focused RTS is a very novel concept. |
| May 3 05:36:23 | 5m 14s | Post-mortum | ♥ 1 | Very nice artwork! and a great idea to boot! Could make for a nice puzzle game with a few hard-hitting moral dilemmas sprinkled in |
| May 3 05:54:23 | 18m 00s | Far Isles Postal Service | ♥ 1 | Charming little game with a BIG potential. wish I could have more opportunities to enjoy the natural beauty of the islands, and get to know the residents better, though their mail and cargo. And maybe some light route-planning puzzles sprinkled in. What can I say, I'm sold! |
| May 3 06:11:04 | 16m 41s | Pollygone | ♥ 1 | Pretty neat little game, could benefit a lot from more sequence-based puzzles instead of steps-based puzzles |
| May 3 06:18:06 | 7m 02s | K-SANDWICH | ♥ 0 | I can already see it, with longer stages and a few new mechanics sprinkled thought; this could be a great commercial game |
| May 3 15:46:25 | 9h 28m | Mech Express | ♥ 1 | Great job, very hectic and fun! This definitely has a lot of potential as a "High mobility" Tower Defence/RTS. Please consider mouse/touch controls for future releases. 👍 |
| May 4 02:25:37 | 10h 39m | Pack It Up | ♥ 5 | Oh my... So much polish already! Just needs a little smoother difficulty curve, more levels and you are up for a commercial release |
