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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | fusionnist's comment | |
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| May 6 17:32:39 | Delevator | ♥ 2 | Well, I can tell you went for a "deep" thematic! Haha. Anyhow, here goes: What struck me the most in your entry was the game's mood. Minimalist graphics, a dark theme... good material! Writing a story up in an LD is from my experience very tough; you got to string the plot together in a game, with a nice "minigame" flavor in each scene; cheers to that! I can't say I enjoyed the plot itself too much: the few premises it has felt a bit entry-level. The illusion/reality twist in each chapter is pretty neat, but past the first time it became fairly predictable. The ending scene felt plain weird too. It's over the top, and along the story it feels like the main character's been given issues piled onto another to fit a stereotype role. Were the story longer, it would establish a more logical progression and you would likely do fine there. My impression entering the game was very nice! I believe you did well with your planning and direction - while I criticized the plot, I didn't fail to notice the good work you put into the game. Congrats! | |
| May 6 17:49:21 | 16m 42s | Sleep Deeper | ♥ 1 | I like the concept! I was able to purchase upgrades with negative dollars, which once I figured out allowed me to beat the game. |
| May 6 19:11:54 | 1h 22m | End of my Rope | ♥ 1 | Man, such an impressive entry. Shout out to Maytch! What can I say, other than good job! I killed the boss before getting the gun, so I couldn't ever use it. But that aside, the levels posed a good challenge, the mechanics were neat and the game even looks good! Congrats! This is admirable. |