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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | m11's comment | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Aug 1 10:41:23 | Fall of Raphael | ♥ 3 | I thought the three-colour graphics were really effective, and loved the character design - a bit of a shadow-puppet feel, very cool! | |
| Aug 1 10:49:41 | 8m 18s | The Last Question | ♥ 1 | Great choice of source material (perfect for the theme!) For a first effort as a visual novel/game, it's a good start - and you've clearly put a lot of effort into the characters' expressions changing, but I personally would have liked more scene changes - in chapter one, for example, more of a series of establishing shots before we're introduced to Adell and Lupov, and then some variation in mid/close/far shots. I also think the 'game' element would be vastly improved by the use of dialogue trees, rather than a single 'advance' button - I know it would mean that you'd have to stray from the original text, but it'd make it feel more interactive/immersive :) |
| Aug 1 10:57:48 | 8m 07s | Glitch | ♥ 1 | Lovely art style (great choice of palette with the blue and pink accents) and really well executed glitching. The platforming was fun, but I have to agree with the previous comments - at certain resolutions, the dialogue wasn't legible, and the glitching was perhaps a bit too frequent for it to be 'comfortable' to look at. But overall, brilliant work! |
| Aug 1 11:02:18 | 4m 30s | Power Chase | ♥ 1 | Really like the concept of the game - and thought the levels were well-designed. Like previous commenters, I have to agree that there were some problems with the responsiveness of the controls on the web version, but overall, it's great work for 48 hours! |
| Aug 1 11:04:59 | 2m 41s | CowPow! | ♥ 1 | Brilliant work - a really fun game! (To reiterate what previous commenters have said, the controls were a bit fiddly, but overall, a great job) |
| Aug 1 11:10:47 | 5m 48s | Fluffy Racer | ♥ 0 | A lovely concept! Like others, I found it a bit confusing at first (would have liked a guided tutorial level, or just a help button), but once I figured it out, it was really fun. Nice work! |
| Aug 1 11:16:55 | 6m 08s | Tornado | ♥ 1 | A really fun idea! I enjoyed the gameplay, and found it really original - I can't remember playing anything similar before. The one thing that surprised me was not taking any damage after being hit by a falling cow - perhaps something to consider adding? Overall - nice job! |
| Aug 1 11:30:25 | 13m 30s | Asteroid Runner | ♥ 1 | A really good looking game, quite fun, but as other commenters have said, the goal wasn't entirely clear? Good work overall :) |