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May 12 12:14:00 Carnival Warfare hi, <br/>here's some feedback about your game. <br/>What I liked : <br/>- Atmosphere / Graphics / Fonts / Music / Sounds <br/>- entierly playable <br/>- Tips on "How to play" when announcing the days end/start <br/>What in my opinion could be improved : <br/>- integration of the theme in the game, the idea is good but could be exploited better. <br/>- fun, it lacks a few fun stuff : it feels like a real job pain :p which could be converted into a good point with a better theme integration I think. <br/>- some collision bugs with the stand to be fixed <br/>- some visual inacuracy with texts (positions, readability) <br/>Very good job overall, I do appreciate the finish quality of your game. <br/>Thanks for the game !
May 15 07:29:00 67h 15m RMBR hi, <br/>here's some feedback about your game. <br/>What I liked : <br/>- Atmosphere (Visual implicity / Text Font / Music / Sounds) <br/>- entierly playable (played the web version) <br/>- original concept that really works <br/>- original theme approach <br/>What in my opinion could be improved : <br/>- more content ! (Well it's usually a good point when people want more :D) <br/>- "Random" exploration leading the player to get "lost" &gt; need to pull up a few times to find his way again. Maybe have some breadcrumb or any orientation tip ? <br/> <br/>Very good job overall, I appreciated the overall clean rendering and experience. <br/>Thanks for the game !