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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | lalanl's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Dec 18 17:05:00 | The ruling party | Something about this made me feel sad. I like your writing. | |
| Dec 24 00:19:00 | 127h 14m | Only one Cookie | Gorgeous drawings, and I like the music. I liked to pretend to be waving at mom, because it made me feel sneaky. Good job! |
| Dec 24 00:30:00 | 11m 00s | SEINOU | I like the way you used the theme, and your level design works so well with the different abilities to make the same level feel interesting. Great job! |
| Dec 24 00:36:00 | 6m 00s | You Only Get One Shot | It's addictive! It would be cool to make the play area bigger, too. :) |
| Dec 24 02:10:00 | 1h 34m | Luduvikus | The way this game is played appeals to me a lot. Crafting reminds me of Settlers of Catan in a way that I like. I can tell you put a lot of care into it. I would be very excited to see it expanded! (Especially the NPC things you mentioned above) <br/> <br/>If you decide to do that, here are some thoughts you can consider or disregard as you like :) <br/> * Sound and music would be lovely, and would provide nice atmosphere to accentuate all your hard work on the rest of the world. <br/> * I think the HUD and its shade obstruct view. Smaller HUD elements or different spacing might help. <br/> * Adding on-screen HUD elements might be a good way to help players remember the controls. <br/> * Whether or not you decide to add sound, a visual indication that the player is taking damage might be a good idea. <br/> * Is there a way to drop, scroll, or stack items? I picked up a whole bunch of stuff and when I made an axe, I couldn't find it because it was off the screen. <br/> * It's easy to lose the player against the green background, especially in trees. A more contrasting color would make it easier to keep track of my location. <br/> <br/> * I really like the progress bar when digging/chopping. <br/> * Your mob designs are creative. They remind me a bit of Faxanadu, which is one of my favorite games. <br/> <br/>I hope to see another of your games soon! |
| Dec 24 02:17:00 | 7m 00s | 1837 | XD A charming game, like always. |
| Dec 24 02:46:00 | 29m 00s | John Power | Good, difficult platformer. Great music! |
| Dec 24 02:51:00 | 5m 00s | DISTANT WORLD FOR THE BOTH OF US | Very interesting controls, terrific feedback, and completely gorgeous graphics. Amazing! |
| Dec 24 02:57:00 | 6m 00s | M'Lady and The Tramp | I'm speechless, but I laughed a lot. Well done. Very well done. |
| Dec 24 03:02:00 | 5m 00s | Don't Lose It! | Interesting use of the theme, challenging, and polished. Excellent job! |
| Dec 24 08:08:00 | 5h 06m | Doki Doggie | Cute pixel doggie! Cool music, too. You've done a really good job with this game :) I'd be excited to play this again if you ever make any kind of changes to it. |