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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | hazzen's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Dec 16 11:13:00 | You Only Get One Try | Excellent for a first entry! No ability to control yourself in the air is interesting, but it removes a lot of the thrill - it is very obvious you are about to lose if you get airborne at a funny angle, and you can't do a thing about it. | |
| Dec 16 11:18:00 | 5m 00s | Just One Minute | Not (easily) playable on a small screen - can't see oncoming cars early enough. Had to force zoomout on the page. <br/> <br/>Ironman mode is nice, but it means I can't play your game anymore. |
| Dec 16 14:20:00 | 3h 02m | One Arrow | No one can hurt you on the middle platform (on top of the door?) |
| Dec 16 14:31:00 | 11m 00s | Leap of Faith | The "jump when you hit the edge" is really nice. Landing on moving platforms is a bit tough, especially as you get later into the levels. |
| Dec 16 17:17:00 | 2h 46m | Hasty Santa | Looks good! I get some weird graphics glitches where the screen has some black flickering (z-fighting maybe?). <br/> <br/>Also, it would be nice to not get killed the second someone from a house spawns; I can be flying across town and someone steps out of their door - kaboom. |
| Dec 16 17:23:00 | 6m 00s | Granny Loosetooth and the Toothfairies | I think I'm supposed to figure out the mechanics by trial-and-error, but it takes a while for a single "run" and the first level doesn't give me too many options. |
| Dec 16 17:43:00 | 20m 00s | Color Range | 4 and 5 are broken on the first level with them, so I can't tell if you went anywhere with this or not. Similar mechanic to Fly Wrench, though much less manic. <br/> <br/>Also, listing the controls would be nice - took me a while to figure out how to move, and then a while longer to figure out jump. |
| Dec 16 17:51:00 | 8m 00s | 1Ball | You have a lot of levels! I got stuck on a bunch of them, and it felt like I could just click randomly and maybe get lucky. It isn't forgiving enough to really let me feel challenged, just frustrated. <br/> <br/>The invisible ones, in particular, where kind of... yeah. |
| Dec 17 08:48:00 | 14h 57m | Zestboi Ice Racing | I can't play your game - I just see some screenshots and a bunch of ads on the page. |
| Dec 17 08:59:00 | 11m 00s | Lost in Space | Too many options, and once you find a route that makes money there is nothing stopping you from doing a bunch of runs on it to make a fortune, then you can afford all the fuel you want. |
| Dec 17 09:04:00 | 5m 00s | Boomerang Blade | Looks and sounds good for a jam entry. Using Another One Bites The Dust is a bit questionable, though. <br/> <br/>I was sad I didn't get any bonus points for hitting multiple targets with one shot, and that it seemed fairly impossible to get hurt. Zombies are too slow to pose a challenge. |
| Dec 17 09:09:00 | 5m 00s | RETRIEVAL - a First Person Boomerang Puzzler | If you want to expand on this, it really needs something to fill all the empty space/time - faster move speed, ambient sound, etc. Your list of things you wanted don't seem to align with what you have - changing gravity is cool, but if that is your mechanic, make it your mechanic. If your mechanic is that you have a boomerang, expand on that (like the stepping stone idea you mentioned, or timed skill shots, etc). |
| Dec 17 09:13:00 | 4m 00s | SANITY | I really didn't get it - first I'm supposed to walk into green clouds, then it is a game over if I do. And I have to replay the long intro just to get back to that screen. |
| Dec 17 12:47:00 | 3h 34m | Tough | Did not get it, and nothing hooked me to try and get it. <br/> <br/>Also, unless I'm mistaken, using pre-made assets is frowned upon and it appears the clouds weren't made by you. The characters look good though, so I'm sure you could have made as-good clouds yourself. Next time! |
| Dec 17 12:50:00 | 3m 00s | Ultimate Wish | Graphics: great! <br/> <br/>Controls: :(. Some sort of line showing the angle would be nice, and it appears you do a few things with deciding where it is valid to stand and not valid to stand that don't line up with the art. Plenty of times, the ball would hit something that looked like good ground, but I would just slide off. |