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Aug 27 08:40:00 EvolutionWar Very cool mechanics indeed, and a good take on the theme! <br/> <br/>Once you understand how the interface works, the game is pretty simple to play. And despite this simplicity the player is faced with tough decisions, has to choose between multiples strategies and can also change his strategy on the fly! <br/> <br/>Even if I disagree with "the first player to send some attackers will win the round", I must admit the game could use some balancing. <br/>I guess this kind of game must be a pain to balance :) <br/> <br/>Good job!
Aug 27 09:32:00 52m 00s The Balance Amazing first impression, but quickly bored.
Aug 27 10:22:00 50m 00s Story of your creation A beautiful baby indeed. Hopefully he will never know how the mother got all those diseases. <br/>Also, I am pretty sure that you should start on the right side ;)
Aug 27 10:46:00 24m 00s Space Amoebas I feel this game if more about survival than evolution. Also the game is too big for my screen, i had to scroll up and down while i was playing.
Aug 27 10:58:00 12m 00s Evolving Threat fun, and feels polished. good job!
Aug 27 11:14:00 16m 00s 2-deoxyribose awesome!
Aug 27 13:25:00 2h 11m RUN RUN AMOEBA You should spend more time working on the "feeling" of your game. <br/>Here the controls feels "heavy" and unresponsive, and that hurts the fun in your game
Aug 27 14:37:00 1h 12m Badass I will remember this entry for a while! <br/>The pacing of the levels and cut-scene is awesome!
Aug 28 07:58:00 17h 21m God Called in Sick Today I like this entry as well, especially because I had a similar idea when the theme came out :) <br/> <br/>I dropped it because I feared people would not enjoy the game and leave it after a few minutes. <br/> <br/>So I am glad to see that not only you did it, but that you also found some really nice ideas that keep it interresting, even when you believe you found everything. <br/> <br/>I believe that with more content, this game could easily hook the player for a very long time. <br/> <br/>Good job!
Aug 28 08:42:00 44m 00s Log2 Not too hard, short, enjoyable... Good job :)
Aug 28 08:52:00 10m 00s Evolution Well I am glad I have beaten all the stages of evolution... only to die from a heart attack in my 40s :)
Aug 28 12:23:00 3h 31m Oneway Nice entry, with a not so common mechanic <br/>Graphics and audio both works very well with the game :) <br/> <br/>Despite a nice progression in difficulty and the fact that you wait to introduce the player to blue barriers, I feel that you should take the player by the hand and guide him a little more : It took me ~5/6 tries to complete a level with no luck involved. <br/> <br/>Letting the player discover the mechanics by himself may profit to some game, but not to this one. <br/> <br/>Anyway, you did a good job. With a little more content and polish it could easily turn into a "bookmarked for lunch break" game :)
Aug 28 14:44:00 2h 21m Strike of Rage ! Awesome!
Aug 30 11:22:00 44h 38m The Phoenix Rising I really like that one. <br/>I figured moody game would not be numerous with this theme, and well... this is a nice take on it :) <br/> <br/>I feel that proper animation would benefit the game a lot (I know, lot of work. Especially if you did all the art by yourself)
Aug 30 17:10:00 5h 48m Species Unfortunatly the audio ruined it for me, as well as the platforming section (out of place in that kind of game, and wayyy too "goofy") <br/> <br/>Good entry, but could have been a great one.
Aug 30 17:16:00 6m 00s Evo Face Could not figure what to do, but still fun. Nice art.
Aug 30 17:23:00 7m 00s Evil Lucien 1st run : fell out of the world <br/>2nd run : freeze <br/>3rd run : "wait... there was nothing more?" <br/> <br/>Good graphics, it brings a nice atmosphere
Aug 30 17:29:00 6m 00s Gravallax I muted it very, VERY quickly. <br/>You could also work on the controls; it would bring more fun to the game if the ship felt less "heavy" and more responsive. <br/>Nice mechanics
Aug 30 17:46:00 17m 00s Yellow Dog Kept me hooked until the end. good job!
Aug 30 17:54:00 8m 00s Slimevolution Nice game, with some challenge. Too bad it starts soooo sloooow. It really hurts the fun in the game, since you have to start all over again. <br/> <br/>The audio was a bit annoying too (i ended up muting it) <br/> <br/>Nice entry nonetheless
Aug 30 21:27:00 3h 33m Tiny Evolution Adventure Awesome
Sep 1 09:54:00 36h 27m Mutation Flight It's a shame you have to wait so long to have some challenge (and so, having fun) <br/>I don't know why, but I really like the graphics here
Sep 1 10:00:00 6m 00s Genotype I liked the controls, which is refreshing when rating LD entries
Sep 1 10:06:00 6m 00s Eve So basically, you dig tunnels between your colonies and kill the aggressives one?
Sep 1 10:17:00 11m 00s Bioboy awesome
Sep 1 10:41:00 24m 00s Parental Guidance Oww. I was aiming for the mood category this time but... one must learn to admit defeat. <br/>Excellent job, and great timelapse
Sep 1 11:03:00 22m 00s Soul Jar I had an annoying bug (https://dl.dropbox.com/u/44222526/souljar.JPG) but was able to play it anyway. <br/> <br/>I was aiming for the mood category this time, but I think you will beat me to it <br/> <br/>Still, one of my favorite entries :)
Sep 1 11:14:00 11m 00s Evolutionator! Nice entry <br/>However; I felt like the controls were "reversed": I often died because i was trying to shoot with arrows and move with wasd. (also, try to handle azerty keyboards -zqsd- next time)
Sep 1 11:22:00 8m 00s Deerfeast Tribe awesome
Sep 1 11:27:00 5m 00s Dawn of Dimension controls and physic are way to goofy for it to work
Sep 1 11:30:00 3m 00s Shroom Like the art and the general feel of the controls. However, better attack animations would have been great (especially for vertical attacks) <br/>Good job!
Sep 1 11:50:00 20m 00s Octogeddon awesome entry
Sep 9 11:20:00 191h 30m Where am I? I really liked that one. it's a shame you can't do anything more. I was juste waiting for something to happen since there was nothing else to do. When i got stuck in that room, i was like "i don't know what is comming; but it is coming soon", which ruined it for me. <br/>5/5 mood anyway :)
Sep 9 11:31:00 11m 00s A Castle in the Desert Nice game. The music was great but i found the sound effets 'aggressive'. too loud maybe.
Sep 9 11:46:00 15m 00s AvRvE Awesome. The only thing i didn't like was the music.
Sep 9 11:53:00 7m 00s Haunted nice game
Sep 9 12:09:00 16m 00s Influenza "hey, i wasted the first 20hours, but still managed to make the best game you have seen yet" <br/>Awesome game! less randomness and sound effect would have been nice though
Sep 9 12:26:00 17m 00s Ages of Irving I really liked that one, one of my fav! <br/>5/5 in many categories (not sound; obviously :) )
Sep 9 12:33:00 7m 00s Deep Sea Fish Loves You Forever reading the description, i was expecting a boring entry. <br/>I was wrong.
Sep 9 12:48:00 15m 00s Beetlefield : The Forecast so... basically, you just click once and watch? how did i spent 20 minutes on that?
Sep 9 12:54:00 6m 00s Neural Nodes oww, one of my little boy walked strait to outer space :/ <br/>nice game
Sep 9 13:16:00 22m 00s Revolution When i grabbed the cowboy outfit, my computer crashed. Twice. <br/> <br/>controls are a bit strange, but i liked the game
Sep 9 13:24:00 8m 00s Gene Jumble You should add a cap to the number of permutation we can do for each level. I ended up randomly switching the genes, hopping i would stumble on something i could easily solve (oooh the irony)
Sep 9 13:30:00 6m 00s Meow for MUTATION! nice take on the theme
Sep 9 13:42:00 12m 00s Crab I liked it but... I really don't know how to rate that one