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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | alexandervrs's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| May 13 16:35:00 | Where Are You Teddy? | I liked the graphics and the music sets the mood. <br/>Although I stopped at the 3rd tutorial level as it didn't seem I could bounce back correctly after taking the growing potion. The tutorial messages were a bit confusing as well -for example at the 2nd level, it says that you don't need to jump but you actually do need to jump early in that level. | |
| May 13 18:39:00 | 2h 04m | These are your Friends | I'll have to agree with the controls (especially with picking up) and the throwing motion could use some physics for the objects that are released. But the girl-island idea was unique and cute. :) |
| May 13 19:14:00 | 35m 00s | Asylum | I believe you could get away by adding simple sound effects and ambience. :) <br/> <br/>I treated this as an interactive movie than a game though, gameplay was pretty plain and the monster AI wasn't challenging. You could use his phobias as obstacles and give some kind of backstory or foreshadowing. <br/> <br/>Concept was nice and you played around with the theme nicely too. |
| May 13 19:25:00 | 11m 00s | Science 101 - The Sewer Chronicles | Seems I couldn't pass the science class. xD <br/> <br/>Fun with the growing/shrinking concept, collision was weird at some times and the voice acting was funny, maybe it needed some more variant quotes when you died so it would get that old. |
| May 13 19:42:00 | 17m 00s | Dusty | I expected more than 2 levels, too short! <br/>And creepy art... xD |
| May 13 20:12:00 | 30m 00s | Pastor Mundi | Aww this looks interesting. Sounds like a good concept. :) |
| May 13 20:36:00 | 24m 00s | Propolis | It would be nice to have some powerups and some kind of attack (with the sting maybe?) <br/>Cute art and music though. |
| May 13 20:41:00 | 5m 00s | Jack | I kept trying to find a shoot button when I was in the plane and flew over him to an area I wasn't supposed to be. <br/>I can't hide that I laughed at how the poor giant was defeated. xD <br/> <br/>and although I appreciated the checkpoints, this game could benefit from health/lives. |
| May 13 21:00:00 | 19m 00s | No One Said It Wasn't Aliens | I liked the animation, I thought I could do some damage to the houses, could make it more interesting if you add that. |
| May 13 21:24:00 | 24m 00s | Tinysasters | This is a nice and detailed puzzle game. :) |
| May 13 22:10:00 | 46m 00s | Tiny Shards | The graphics & music were great. The platformer gameplay worked very smooth as well. <br/>In addition to enemies, you could add hazards like spikes, timed traps etc. to make gameplay more interesting. Also sometimes I was able to "cheat" by leaving the enemy out of the viewport and shooting at him while he or his projectiles didn't follow me. <br/>Some enemy placement felt kinda "cheap" though, especially for the Skull enemies which usually were placed after a jump, not giving you enough time to react. <br/>Finally the game could either benefit from checkpoints or health items/powerups. The later levels are pretty long and filled with enemies & projectiles which drain your health fast. <br/>It is already an enjoyable game though. |
| May 13 22:58:00 | 48m 00s | Nook | Pretty short, I kept wanting for more levels! <br/>I really love the art and level design. It seems the game could use some enemies, traps & powerups to make it more challenging. :) |
| May 13 23:03:00 | 5m 00s | Escape from Minimars | Graphics were pretty good. The setting and gameplay was getting pretty boring though, and as far as the controls are concerned, I'd like to be able to control the laser, maybe keyboard+mouse controls could work better here. :) |
| May 13 23:21:00 | 18m 00s | Nobody | It seems this is supposed to be an excerpt from the "Odyssey" where Odysseus has the plan to hide under the sheep in order to get away from the Cyclops's cave. The Cyclops eats some of his allies in his cave and after getting drunk on wine he falls asleep. Then Odysseus and the others pierces his eye with a pole and escapes. The funny part of the myth is that the Cyclops starts running blind for help to the others of his kind and when they ask him "Who did this?" he replies "Nobody did it!", that was actually the name that Odysseus used to trick the Cyclops. <br/>Alright, I am done with the mythology class, -can't help it since I am Greek- gameplay needed some obstacles to be interesting, not commenting on the "obvious", people above have covered me. xD |
| May 13 23:34:00 | 13m 00s | Predicament | Nice game, plays well and fits with the theme nicely too! |