Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD52 → Harvest Moon
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 338 | 1.83 | 20 | |
| Fun | 338 | 1.34 | 21 | |
| Innovation | 337 | 1.97 | 21 | |
| Theme | 324 | 2.34 | 21 | |
| Humor | 273 | 1.47 | 20 | |
| Mood | 307 | 2.50 | 21 |
Nice little short story. I don't usually see this type of entry in Ludum Dare, so points for doing something different :slight_smile:
45 hours is a lot of time to spend in a 48 hour window, congratulations on finishing. I hope you got everything in that you wanted and now you can find some rest!
Interactive fiction is supposed to be interactive. This is just a regular short story. It belongs in a writing contest.
I'am afraid I missed the interactive parts. I could just click on the button that continues the story. Have I misunderstood the game?
Either it's not "interactive", or I missed something. Neat story though, congrats on finishing it!
The idea and story is okay. I would have liked to seen some choses, and also the story could have used a bit more work.