not-as-artistic 2021-10-06 06:32
Nicely written and great narration too! I could definitely see how this becomes a choose-your-own-adventure game, and I like the premise. I hope you continue and finish it after the jam. As for being too ambitious and getting too little done... That makes two of us. I made a little text-based game myself, but had too little time to flesh it out, much like you did. Enjoyed the story! It was like listening to a Nosleep podcast.