drnoir 2017-12-05 01:04
Ok so just played a few mins on this, and I will start with some positive before I offer some constructive crit - I think the concept for this, is great and a very interesting one, not often explored in games, which is good, and a mark of an interesting mind at play.
However with the game I struggled to get far, there is no audio as far as I can tell which it would benefit from to increase atmosphere, some of the spelling is off (but you are young I think so I don't want to be toooo harsh with that, you should of seen my spelling when I was younger and even now sometimes! haha), the game also crashes for me to the main menu when I die / fall.
I don't want to be harsh but I think you could improve this but I think this is a good idea that could be developed much further. The initial bath area could also be made to have more features such as mirrors etc.