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ShrunkenThief

By craig-downie

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall2
Fun2
Innovation2
Theme2
Graphics2
Audio2
Humor2
Mood2

Comments

drnoir 2017-12-05 01:04

Ok so just played a few mins on this, and I will start with some positive before I offer some constructive crit - I think the concept for this, is great and a very interesting one, not often explored in games, which is good, and a mark of an interesting mind at play.

However with the game I struggled to get far, there is no audio as far as I can tell which it would benefit from to increase atmosphere, some of the spelling is off (but you are young I think so I don't want to be toooo harsh with that, you should of seen my spelling when I was younger and even now sometimes! haha), the game also crashes for me to the main menu when I die / fall.

I don't want to be harsh but I think you could improve this but I think this is a good idea that could be developed much further. The initial bath area could also be made to have more features such as mirrors etc.

craig-downie 2017-12-05 01:11

thank you drnoir sorry about the audio i only had time to add 1 sound effect as i had 10 mins left to finish and upload and kind of rushed the text on the menu but thanks will definetly improve now that i have time after the game jam

drnoir 2017-12-05 01:26

Excellent, keep at it, every game is a learning process and you're always going to find things to fix, I found it tough today though enjoyable as well, nice one!

tuzepoito 2017-12-10 17:10

I can't get very far, I can't reach the shelf because every time I jump out of the sink, I fall to the floor and go back to the title screen (where I have no choice but quit because the mouse has disappeared) Is that normal?