Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD39 → Charger
By matt-bob
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 4.00 | 3 | ||
| Fun | 3.00 | 3 | ||
| Innovation | 3.00 | 3 | ||
| Theme | 5.00 | 3 | ||
| Graphics | 4.00 | 3 | ||
| Humor | 4.00 | 3 | ||
| Mood | 3.00 | 3 |
I loved your characters. Bonus points for cool animal characters. You started with a simple premise and it led up to a nice "punchline" of sorts. Some minor bugs with Ron sometimes being in the wrong place after scene transitions, but it was nothing game-breaking.
Keep making stuff. Have fun with it. You've got a nice start.
HAHAHAHA this was really cute! A very short story to say the least, but I was engaged the whole way through. I like the design of the rhinos; the graphics overall were very adorable.
When I first played, I had to start the game over because I accidentally skipped the dialogue in the first part. Perhaps you'd want to consider implementing scrolling text in the future for the text boxes, which will make the dialogue a little easier to read and less difficult to mistakably advance through. But other than that, while very short, this entry overall feels complete. Though it wouldn't hurt to have some audio as well. :)
Haha, very cute