Hey I saw you had no reviews so I thought I'd drop by.
First off, it would be super helpful if you zip your game and put a direct link to the zip. I was confused when I ended up in your google drive folder!
Second, Art is probably the best I've seen. It's super cool.
I couldn't figure out how to play the game. I went to where the gambling was and tried to place a bet but all the other people disappeared.
Another thing you should know, you need to rate other people's games so that your game will be more visible more people will play it!
donvermo
2017-08-04 11:05
The graphics of this game look super cool but just like the previous poster I got stuck. If you want to get more feedback for your game here's a few things I can recommend:
#### Post an HTML5/Web version whenever possible People generally are more inclined to play your game when they need to put in only a minimal amount of effort in order to get started. If that is not an option for you then you can try one of the following:
#### Post screenshots and or videos on your page People like to know what they are about to play, giving them screenshots on the information page can help them decide if it is the kind of game that they would enjoy playing and or if it is the kind of game that they can give strong constructive feedback on.
#### Rate other peoples games LudumDare works with the principle of give an take, it's a community effort to make sure that everyone has at least some people play their game so that they can learn from the feedback on hopefully make an even better game the next time around! It's not only good etiquette to do this but the algorithm for the search in this website also makes entries from people who have left ratings and feedback for others more visible (this is part of the karma system)
#### Respond to feedback This one is not a big must but it can help generate positive sentiment. Especially when you did not have the time to make a video walkthrough it can help you address problems that people run into so that they don't get stuck. You wouldn't want people to miss out on the entirety of your game because some bug or confusion prevented them from progressing? Help people help you.
I hope these help you find your way in our community and it would be great to see you stick around.
spiffy
2017-08-04 12:41
Very confusing to end up in your google drive, if you are going to do that in future I recommend creating a standalone folder with just the game inside (if you cannot create a ZIP that is). I got very confused trying to locate said game and ended up in a folder full of your development files.
Gameplay seems a bit broken and hard to figure out. Maybe work some more on the mechanics, while the art style is beautiful, it isn't everything. That being said the art is gorgeous and one of my favourite things about your game.