pauljs 2015-04-20 16:39
Nice game !
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD32 → Paper Work
By yonbergman
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Nice game !
My only complaint is that there is no feedback for having completed a signature. It's surprisingly distressing seeing the page go away whilst the signature disappears. Esp. if that's the one that loses you the game.
Sometimes the click to the signature did not work ... And the places for signatures could be integrated into the content of the page.
Funny idea, and I enjoyed the music.
Some things that could be improved:
- Some kind of feedback to the player when finishing a sig. I felt like I had to drag the mouse very far to the right to finish a signature. Perhaps signing should be faster?
- When the game starts I think the first page starts sliding too soon, making it too hard to sign the lines on it.
- Font is hard to read.
Reminds me of the process of getting a mortgage. Nice music