maxyan 2014-12-08 07:01
Like the graphics and narrative.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD31 → Karusa
By princesseuh
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Mood | 371 | 3.14 | ||
| Graphics | 456 | 3.24 | ||
| Innovation | 994 | 2.43 | ||
| Overall | 1064 | 2.62 | ||
| Fun | 1154 | 2.10 | ||
| Theme | 1161 | 2.52 | ||
| Coolness | 1934 | 32 |
Like the graphics and narrative.
The graphics are very simple but still convey a nice moody feeling.
The graphics and overall mood were good, but there wasn't really a... goal to this. This felt more like an interactive movie than a game.
Very moody atmosphere.
I think this game is a pretty good effort. One piece of advice that I would like to give you, and that is not even game related, don't go around saying you're bad at anything. Just make something, show it around, and let people give you feedback for what you do. You shouldn't worry about being good or bad. You should be worrying about making stuff, as much as you can, because you like it. And that way, you'll become better at what you do. I think this game would have been better without you worrying about being a good story teller. Then again, it made the game charming in its own way.
Good job, keep it up.
@alvarop Yes of course!
My goal with this game wasn't really to say 'Hey I'm bad in storytelling so I made this crappy game' as much as it was 'Hey I originally had a pretty cool idea but couldn't find a way to tell it correctly due to me being inexperienced in storytelling'
Still this is technically my first attempt at making a story-based game. I'm really more a 'make a base then make content' guy haha! All my current games (even the most popular one which is coming to Steam soon) are content-based game. I'll work on making better story for sure though.
Thanks for the feedback!
With some music it'd be even better! I liked the graphics. It was short, but good job! (I liked the rain effect)
@ChuiGum Thanks! Unfortunately I'm not really good at making musics! :(
I looked for a music generator or something like that but couldn't find any that suited my need. Too bad! I agree that it would have added to the ambiance.
Looks neat. A bit of music wouldn't hurt though, even just something auto generated. And maybe a few more screens to play through instead of just the one. :P
Good start though, and nice rain.