Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD30 → Mirror - a tiny visual short story
By pixelspirit
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Nice story! Cool little production. I don't know what you're talking about when you say you undershot - this is a story that you could expand greatly both forwards and backwards (ie you could explore what your world is like before the smash, then the changes afterwards will have more impact).
Lots of potential, lots to work with. Keep at it :D
Cute game, I liked the story.
Wow... wow, I really liked this. Go review some more games so you get more coverage! The writing is excellent, with an atmosphere of real tension. Yes, it was a tiny game with only one decision in it, but I was engrossed in the scene, the horror, all of it. The lack of music really worked. It was sparse, centralized, minimalistic. I would like it if the bad end had been fleshed out a little bit more--really scare the pants off us!--but all the rest of it was wonderful. Thank you for the game!
Hey, a fellow RenPy user !
Not bad for your first time, the idea was interesting, I just feel adding some music would make the story feels more alive ^^.
Download link doesn't seem to be working at the moment. I guess it... Dropped your files huehuehuehue. I'll keep checking back though!
Anssi@MooseflyGames