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Themus

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ViliX 2014-08-25 10:58

Rather interesting story :)

mrexcessive 2014-08-25 13:45

Loads of effort to create all that content, great job! Found the story quite nihilistic, but maybe that's a side-effect of seeing both points of view ?

tanjent 2014-08-26 07:27

This really reminds me of those (fantasy) books where you read a few paragraphs and then flipped a few pages back and forth (and usually ended up being killed by a drunk barbarian at page 120).

I think this game could really benefit from a cover picture or some kind of border theme (like a book frame / cover); some small icon of the location or something for each page. I think that would make it look so more polished and add quite a bit to the content. Take a look at Frankenstein or some other interactive books at inkle studios for some inspiration on how others have solved this!