microapple 2014-04-28 03:19
Can't seam to open the game, I think you may have linked to the dropbox page rather than the .html file itself...
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD29 → Inside Yourself
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Mood | 87 | 3.80 | ||
| Theme | 293 | 3.57 | ||
| Overall | 876 | 2.86 | ||
| Innovation | 899 | 2.60 | ||
| Fun | 1147 | 2.19 | ||
| Coolness | 1798 | 35 |
Can't seam to open the game, I think you may have linked to the dropbox page rather than the .html file itself...
Unable to run game dropbox wants to download the html.
Sorry guys, for the life of me I cant figure out what's going on here. I'd love to blame in on a headache, but I'm trying my best, promise :)
here, I put it up my server until you fixed the dropbox woe:
http://finefin.com/ludumdare/beneaththesurface/Beneath.html
You can link to this anytime, if you want. It'l be up there until you tell me to delete it. okay?
now I'm going to test it ;)
wow, that was creepy! very nice interactive story!
Better to play online, but I donwloaded it played it.
Good mood, eerie ending.
finefin you are AMAZING lol thank you! I've figured out it's some glitch with twine that's doing it, it's been a bit funny since I had my comp redone but it's really being a hassle!
Wonderfully disturbing, especially the ending.
whoa a journey of the mind!!
It is a weird interesting story. Well done.
Very creepy but good! It wasn't so much a game, as much as a story that you have to click to advance to the next section, but it was really great. Awesome job!
Creepy atmosphere and a nice sense of foreboding building throughout. Good work.
A great journey
I liked the story, though after the ending I still felt like some things were unresolved, and there were some grammatical issues along the way (mostly in the use of past tense). You did a great job with the unsettling mood. This is one of the more interesting takes on the theme I've seen so far.