nerlin 2013-08-27 06:03
Good concept. Interesting voice :)
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| Coolness | 1970 |
Good concept. Interesting voice :)
Hey, man! Enjoyed the final twist in the story, I was really not expecting it, thinking 'ooh cliché', but you got met ;p did not understand how it relates to the 10 seconds theming, though.
@fgielow thx - it was supposed to be a story you life through while he is falling to his dead. but you are right, it did turn out very different. got to work on that. thx for the feedback
You're cool! I'm sure the game will be great!
The speech is a bit too long, we want playing more.
@iterative - i know, but this is only a game concept that shows the story, not the game play.
too loong, no fan
Wow, that story took a very dark turn. The visuals are interesting to look at, the narration is really good, and the story is engaging. It's too bad you didn't have enough time to implement any of the mini-games you had planned, but for what it's worth, I thought the mood of this entry was excellent.
I love the voice over and the characters total obsession, very indie feel and cool!! 5 stars!
This does have a really good story with a dark twist, and the artwork is brilliant, but in the end I was wondering what all of this had to do with the theme. It felt more like a short movie than an artistic game. :/