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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | elZach's comment | |
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| Apr 29 13:58:48 | L.Y.L.A. - Your personal Living Your Life Assistant | ♥ 1 | Excellent sound design. While the backgroundmusic was a tad annoying the beeps and boops more than made up for it. Also decently paced text and writing. I like this entry, but I don't particularly like to travel, so most of my decisions would be to stay at home regardless of who asks. Would've really benefited from more different activity-suggestions, maybe something akin to daily chores etc. Also I think you did your self a bit of disservice to have frontloaded so much of the narrative. Would've been more interesting to have some questions, then some dialogue, then some questions again. You put quite a bit of characterdevelopment in, which is like the hardest part -> with a bit better distribution I think you would reach far more people than having it segmented like that. Cheers! |