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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | NonSans's comment | |
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| Dec 9 18:32:49 | Power and Reaction | ♥ 2 | Interesting work with theme. The combat felt surprisingly fluid and the animations definitely helped to give me that impression. The sounds where a bit overwhelming and I think the game would have been better off without the voice acting. What language was that by the way? I hated the red guys... playing tennis with me... But it sure as hell was a joy to watch. Graphics were minimalistic but as a mentioned the animations are absolutely decent. All in all, a decent entry. | |
| Dec 9 19:48:07 | 1h 15m | Mayfly | ♥ 3 | Amazing! Your "Mayfly" is the best game I've played this LD so far. The story kept me enganged the whole time and I was surprised by the lenght of it. The visual design was minimalistic, in all the good ways. I'm digging that! I bet with a bit more time you could have visualized the key scenes in the story (the climbing, office, the car etc.). The sound design also was on point. The effects were definitely fittingly placed with care and intent. The soundtrack was nothing short of amazing, your work alone? Impressive. I think the depiction of the MCs OCD was pretty accurate, judging from my limited knowledge about it. You nailed the parts where the MC goes crazy (the jew parts etc.) and the screen effects really contributed to that. The theme was obviously integrated, while not very innovative per se (doesn't matter as the execution was great). I only have very few "complaints" and they are more or less nitpicking considering all the good parts mentioned above and all of them can be traced back to the limited amount of time you had while making this. The end felt kinda rushed, with 3 deaths literally happening (or being revealed) in merely 5 minutes. I also had the impression that my choices didn't have much effect on the story (please correct me if I'm wrong, I would love to do another playthrough!). It's good to see another "story driven" game in this LD contest and I think you did an impressive job! Keep up your good work Ashley, I hope I will see more of you in the next Ludum Dare compos. - NonSans, lowercase_games |