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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Yazara's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Dec 14 19:53:00 | Get to the Points | Very good game with satisfying sound and nice graphics :) <br/>I didn't notice an overall increase of difficulty (number of points) too much as I progressed, so if there is something like that implemented, the curve could be steeper. | |
| Dec 14 21:47:00 | 1h 54m | From the Deep | Nice concept :) <br/>I find it difficult to follow the player though since he's so tiny. |
| Dec 14 22:06:00 | 19m 00s | Cactus Simulator | The art looks really nice and polished :) <br/>The controls work good on android, the gameplay isn't too exciting though. Maybe you could spice it up with some other mechanics. <br/>For example every now and then the cactus grows a flower, and during the time the flower is visible you have to collect the items instead of dodging them. |
| Dec 14 22:24:00 | 18m 00s | Growing Ice | The artstyle looks really nice! <br/>The sound effects overall are nice, apart from the sound of the monster behind you, which is too intrusive. <br/>And why does the character get faster when it shrinks? |
| Dec 15 00:56:00 | 2h 32m | Botany | Awesome game! Quite a lot of content for 48 hours, I really liked the dialogues as well! <br/>The only thing I missed was an option to hold down your button to keep shooting/ biting. |
| Dec 15 19:16:00 | 18h 20m | Two Button Controls | Very aesthetic game, and great gameplay :) The controls work really well. <br/>The connection to the theme fells a bit far fetched though :P |
| Dec 15 19:34:00 | 18m 00s | Control Two Buttons | The framerate on web player is too low for me to actually play the game as soon as the clip appears and the windows download crashes after the intro :( <br/>I really like your idea though, very innovative! |
| Dec 16 00:11:00 | 4h 37m | The Dancing Sunflower | The controls work well and the music is nice :) <br/>Some ideas for improvement I had were <br/>1. decrease the speed when the sunflower is small <br/>2. show the next lightbeam with an indicator to make it less random, but maybe add an obstacle (like a cloud) which stuns you, for more tactical depth |
| Dec 16 06:18:00 | 6h 07m | Resource Stealer | You could improve the game a lot with some little tweaks: <br/>- add a repeating background texture to support the movement motion of the spaceship <br/>- show the limit of resources your ship can hold <br/>- make the asteroids move around in space <br/>Also there's a lack of challenge at the moment, there are many possibilities to make the game more dfficult and therefore more fun. You should really consider adding some in the future :) |
| Dec 16 06:31:00 | 13m 00s | Agent Hooker | Amazing, very well done! You should definetely continue developing this in the future, maybe think about publishing a mobile version as well! |
| Dec 16 11:24:00 | 4h 53m | Infinity Monkey Autocorrect | Wow, I'm really curious how the tech behind this game works! Really innovative and interesting game. <br/>I really like the soundtrack and intro as well :) |
| Dec 17 22:16:00 | 34h 52m | BREAKING MOUSE :) | I like the graphics, the cows are really cute :3 <br/>It's really hard to see your projectiles though, the first time I played I actually didn't notice them. <br/>And btw, you could put the android game on the play store for easier installation. |
| Dec 18 00:44:00 | 2h 28m | My Best (Magical) Friend! | Classic, well crafted japanese adventure! Nice, haven't seen something like this in a game jam before. |
| Dec 18 00:51:00 | 7m 00s | Thorn - The Dreamer | Cool concept, some more balancing is needed though. <br/>Sometimes it's really hard to evade obstacles since you change directions too slowly. <br/>And a tip to make the text less blurry: scale the UI down and increase the font size ;) |
| Dec 21 21:07:00 | 92h 16m | S(p)eed | Really fun game, the movement feels very smooth :) <br/>And I like how the plants turn brown and stay from your previous runs. |
| Dec 21 21:11:00 | 4m 00s | Planet Gaiardian | I LOVED the sounds! :D |
| Dec 25 12:45:00 | 87h 34m | Run Cube, run! | Fun game, but the color choices seem weird to me, as well as the key mappings. On a german keyboard, Z and X aren't next to each other :P |
| Dec 30 13:54:00 | 121h 09m | Jail Jammers | Really innovative concept and could be really fun with a bit more polishing. Unfortunately it's very hard, especially at the beginning and weird things happened when both pisoners were connected but seperated by a wall. <br/>I think it would be better if you could move both prisoners in both directions and maybe switch between them with an extra key. Or move both at the same time, with 4 buttons. <br/>The art is really nice :) |
| Jan 3 00:23:00 | 82h 29m | Growth Industries | Awesome game, Quill. I've downloaded the android version and played it a lot, so here are some things I would work on if you continue the project (which you absolutely should). <br/>- Finance Dept. is way overpowered. <br/>- There should be a less random way to gain extra months, since they are the strongest addition you can buy. <br/>- Maybe an option to pay money to get a new set of cards would decrease the randomness. <br/>- Zoom on android doesn't really work, otherwise this would be a great mobile game. <br/>- You should prevent having two of the same cards to chose from. <br/>I'm curious how high you will score and how the future of your game will look like :) |