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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | SnedHlepPls's comment |
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| Dec 22 16:59:00 | 32r | Congratulations on your first Ludum Dare! Despite its short length, I thought that this was a nice little game- the music made me relax until near the end when the ominous drone kicks in and you realise something(won't spoil! XD). I also liked how you interpreted the '2 buttons' theme. <br/> <br/>I think that the colour of the text made some of the words a bit difficult to read when the text scrolled the the right hand side of the screen so the darker portion of the background was behind the text. | |
| Dec 22 17:12:00 | 13m 00s | Currant Matters In Bird Town | I like the depth that you've put into the characters, and how they have their own unique personality. The music I think fitted nicely with the theme of the game. I think that the text could have done with being a bit faster though. |
| Dec 22 17:44:00 | 32m 00s | S.I.L. | I really like the concept of this game- the art direction certainly reinforces the idea! The narrative so far is good, and adds a lot to the game. In terms of things to improve on, possibly a decription of some of the executables/scripts as while you can infer their purposes from the cutscenes, it is sometimes not abundantly clear. Sound would have also added to the experience. <br/> <br/>In any case, well done! I think this would be an interesting concept for you to take further after the Ludum Dare! |