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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | whiteravens's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Aug 27 00:26:00 | Ten 2nd's | LOL, we have the same interpretation of the theme. Unfortunately, I can't run your game, it crashes on my Windows, and Newgrounds say it's under review. <br/> <br/>Try my game out here too: <br/>http://www.ludumdare.com/compo/ludum-dare-27/?action=preview&uid=23106 | |
| Aug 27 01:57:00 | 1h 31m | Runner Up | Not Found <br/> <br/>The requested URL /LD27/RunnerUp-win.zip was not found on this server. |
| Aug 27 02:14:00 | 17m 00s | Drone Ring | Pretty good TD, it just needs some balancing, but that's for the future of the game. Great work! |
| Aug 27 02:41:00 | 27m 00s | SwapArcade | I like the switching of mechanics :). Think of a great way to repackage the game, and it will be huge. |
| Aug 27 02:49:00 | 8m 00s | SoulReaver | My only comment is to use other colors for breakable objects (or a hint like a crack). I'm partially colorblind, and it takes me a while to differentiate your pink and purple. |
| Aug 27 02:52:00 | 3m 00s | Heaven's Intern | Give the game a core mechanic and goal, and your graphics will find its light :) |
| Aug 27 02:59:00 | 7m 00s | Tensed Seconds | The controls are quite difficult. I suggest putting the jump on W instead of spacebar, and shooting can be better at the Spacebar (if you want it all keyboard). <br/> <br/>Nice try for LD Compo though :) |
| Aug 27 03:07:00 | 8m 00s | Anti - Explosive Babies | Those poor babies T__T. Nice concepts and levels though! |
| Aug 27 03:26:00 | 19m 00s | Bloody Mary | Very nice action platformer, with decent AI. That's not easy to make. Great job! |
| Aug 27 12:00:00 | 8h 34m | GitGirl - Conflict Resolver | I really enjoyed the sound and the Japaense game feel. :) You may want to make it a bit more faster, but still great work! |
| Aug 27 12:09:00 | 9m 00s | Meat Game | My characters keep running off the z-axis and falling out forever. :( <br/> <br/>Very well made though! |
| Aug 28 02:44:00 | 14h 35m | DogRocket | I just got it to fly after 8 minutes of pondering. Record of 182m. <br/> <br/>My comment would be to make them snap. I have issues with the bone-shaped ones, and I always cannot connect them together. Also, I have some troubles differentiating vertical from horizontal bones from the pile. <br/> <br/>I like the simple and chaotic mood though. |
| Aug 28 05:38:00 | 2h 54m | My Lovely Nurse-chan can Kill all these Monsters by Herself! | LOL at Game Over screen O_O |
| Aug 28 05:48:00 | 10m 00s | 00000010 | Wonderfully executed! :) My only concern is the Physics, and wall jump can be a bit painful, but I enjoy the concept of the game! :D Well done, one of my favorites so far! |
| Aug 28 06:11:00 | 23m 00s | Ten Second Samurai | I really have no idea what is going on, and how to play it, sorry :( |
| Aug 28 06:17:00 | 6m 00s | 10sec-10dice | I can't download the file :(. Can you upload it to another hosting site (dropbox preferrably)? There's too many 'fake' download links on the page, and it's forcing me to download something else as well. Thanks! |
| Aug 28 06:25:00 | 8m 00s | The Chaos Sisters | I freaked out when I saw the instructions page. <br/> <br/>Nice try for LD though, it will make a good board game if you put in some other mechanics with it. |
| Aug 28 06:52:00 | 27m 00s | Once upon a Night | The game does not run for me :( (Windows 7), I have Java. Nothing happens when I double click exe |
| Aug 28 16:08:00 | 9h 16m | 10 Seconds to Save the World | The exe file won't load for me :(. |
| Aug 28 16:29:00 | 21m 00s | fastDefense | "9:" is an invalid integer. <br/> <br/>Error window pops out when I press enter to start the game. |
| Aug 28 19:59:00 | 3h 30m | Please Hold | Hi Isaac, I have tried your game. <br/> <br/>It's a great starting point and core concept for a prototype! :) |
| Aug 28 20:03:00 | 4m 00s | 10 Seconds of Grey | Really great art and music! It just broke my immersion when they started repeating lines, but that can easily be remedied with unique conversation lines for NPC :) Great job! |
| Aug 28 20:06:00 | 3m 00s | It's Faster with QWOP | It's confusing, it'll be great to give some tips and consistency on how the controls affect the movement. |
| Aug 28 20:10:00 | 4m 00s | 10 Second Election | Bigger font may help and fewer factors to evaluate in the 10 second limit. There seems to be a lot going on in the game, so some balancing will fix it. |
| Aug 28 20:15:00 | 5m 00s | Forever Alone | Music got irritating, but the story feel and game is unique. |
| Aug 28 20:22:00 | 7m 00s | Duel | The feel is really good, very simple variation from Rock Paper Scissors. Maybe some hints on what the AI will do next will make it better! :) |
| Aug 29 04:41:00 | 8h 19m | VIP | I really like this game :) Well made, and I look forward to more features being added into it! |
| Aug 29 20:11:00 | 15h 30m | 10 Seconds to Loot ALL the Things | Pretty fun game :). Only concerns I went through are the collision boxes, some coins going to unreachable areas, and exit very hard to squeeze through in some levels. Overall, it's a great game! :) |
| Aug 30 01:11:00 | 5h 00m | One Hundred in One | Could not find the main class: content.Main. Program will exit. <br/> <br/>:( |
| Aug 30 01:15:00 | 4m 00s | Story O' Dare | It's great, the first puzzle is just too cryptic and trial and error based (without the solution spoilers) |
| Aug 30 01:24:00 | 9m 00s | The Super Fair Trial Show | Amazing game! Great job! |
| Aug 30 02:13:00 | 49m 00s | Make a game Game | Really awesome idea, one of my favorites :). Great work!!! |
| Sep 4 04:43:00 | 122h 30m | Tick Tick Mother F***er | Too much unnecessary profanity. |
| Sep 4 04:50:00 | 7m 00s | Viral Attack | Could have been a great game if the controls weren't clunky. I don't know if I'm attacking or not as well. Still, one of the most innovative I played so far though. |
| Sep 4 20:29:00 | 15h 39m | Get well soon | Extra paths to go will be nice, but otherwise, it's a good game :) |
| Sep 4 20:40:00 | 11m 00s | This is Tio | This is great, just put a timer shown on the screen, and feedback on what happens in the game. |
| Sep 6 21:47:00 | 49h 07m | Mage Run: The Short Quest For The Legendary Yellow Cheese | Looks good from the preview, but sadly I can't play since I only have Direct 10.0. :( |
| Sep 6 21:55:00 | 8m 00s | Jack and the Alarm Clock | Frame rate seems to be too fast, but good game! |
| Sep 6 23:16:00 | 1h 21m | 10 Seconds Before the World Ends | Really great work! |
| Sep 7 00:39:00 | 1h 23m | 10 Sec Hero | Needs some balancing I guess. I never got past the first few blocks. |
| Sep 7 00:48:00 | 9m 00s | 10 Second Urf Defender | Pretty fun to play. Still lots of good room for growth in future iterations :) <br/> <br/>And next time, please make your game closeable anytime. I don't know why the X button of the window was removed there. |
| Sep 13 00:41:00 | 143h 53m | Defuse in 10 seconds | Level 21 :) Nicely done! |