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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | PickledBrain's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Aug 27 06:50:00 | The Adventure of Charles Starwin | Couldn't play. Server's timing out. | |
| Aug 27 21:28:00 | 14h 38m | UN-Natural Selection | Same here. Nothing came up. |
| Aug 27 21:36:00 | 8m 00s | An Infection's Journey | I wasn't sure why I died. The stairs after the second jump are annoying. Still the concept is interesting. |
| Aug 28 04:19:00 | 6h 43m | LD24 X0ut | Very good game. The writing/dialog gave it a lot of meaning and context, which was fun. Some technical things, the game ate my mouse (I had to use the keyboard to EndProcess the game because there didn't seem to be any other way to regain control). And I wasn't sure when I was being hurt. Other than that A+ |
| Aug 28 04:31:00 | 12m 00s | Arcane Dungeons ( aka Evil Lord vs Angel for the salvation or perdition of a hero's soul) | I see good potential in this. It would be fun to play as either the Keeper or the Angle (I think I'd prefer the keeper :) The graphics are nice. I really like the moving backgrounds. It would be really cool and fun if the wizard had animations for falling into the traps (I would play those up a lot for humor). The cards look nice and clean. I didn't always know which one went were though. One suggestion I would make is to have a whole party of Heros (this way some can get killed and it would add more variety). Good game :) |
| Aug 28 06:33:00 | 2h 02m | Fish Selection | Oops. Looks like you forgot to include your assets (the data folder) with your executable. (I've done this with unity as well). |
| Aug 28 06:37:00 | 4m 00s | GONADS | Hmmm. I'm just getting a blank screen. But don't worry. It seems like lots of people are having problems and I'll wait to play your game. It's interesting :) I demand lady robots |
| Aug 28 06:41:00 | 4m 00s | Fall Of The Ark | Loved the Tron level. I didn't get any sound. |
| Aug 28 06:49:00 | 8m 00s | A.D.A.P.T.I.O.N.: You Are What You Eat! | One hit kill is a little harsh but I really liked the changing character and how hunger was the driving force. |
| Aug 28 06:56:00 | 7m 00s | Larsa Sapiens | I Evolved into A Chopper! I am amazing! :) The graphics and the music create a cohesive look and feel. Great game. Oh and I love the cigar. |
| Aug 28 06:57:00 | 1m 00s | Evolution Revolution | The web link seems to lead to a blank page. |
| Aug 28 07:17:00 | 20m 00s | Bio Hierarchy | Now the concept is...Well I'm trying to wrap my head around it because it seems like a fantasy world that includes evolution. It was odd but it's an interesting odd :) I like your title screen. Lastly, great background music. |
| Aug 28 07:28:00 | 11m 00s | Neural Nodes | Your monster thing is creepy. It's gotta be based on those frogs that hold their young in their backs. Those things are so nasty lol Anyway I really liked the mutations and the humorous intro text and it's fun to boot. Be even better with sounds and music. Great job. |
| Aug 28 07:33:00 | 5m 00s | Panspermia | Very well done. Well polished and fun. |
| Aug 28 08:00:00 | 27m 00s | ThroughoutTheAges | I like the character art, especially the knights. |
| Aug 28 19:16:00 | 11h 16m | kernel exception | Having the only way to move my robots was to make them patrol drove me nuts. But I like the graphics and I love the concept. |
| Aug 28 19:18:00 | 2m 00s | Selection Sort | I don't see any links for the game. |
| Aug 28 20:02:00 | 44m 00s | Dr. Ken and Dr. Ken | Awesome intro music. You spelled civilization wrong (sorry to nit pick). I like your sense of humor, the art style, and those freaking Rabbit Ice Monsters! |
| Aug 28 20:03:00 | 1m 00s | Phase Evolution | I'm getting 404 page not found on both your links. |
| Aug 28 20:15:00 | 12m 00s | Evo | I like the pixel style you used. I like the character building in the beginning. What was difficult was I didn't know what to do after that. It was also hard to see where my character was. Still I really like this idea, you just need more clear goals and feedback for the player. Add that and I think you would have a unique game people would enjoy a lot. |
| Aug 29 17:17:00 | 21h 02m | Gattagon - DEMO | The player movement and action are smooth and well done. |
| Aug 29 17:34:00 | 17m 00s | Kitten Farm Simulator 3000 | I liked the game. You give good feedback to the player so they always know what's going on. Now the sound. You really need to remove that sound once you win. That was bad. It hurt my ears. But I like all the kittens running around. The player animation could use a little work but other than that you did a good job on graphics. Good game. |
| Aug 29 18:19:00 | 45m 00s | Mutate? Exterminate! | It just crashes on startup for me. DX and the redist installed just fine. |
| Aug 29 18:29:00 | 10m 00s | SURVIVE | The ending gets a little insane and I can't really see what's happening. Other than that, great graphics and the gameplay is unique. |
| Aug 29 18:42:00 | 13m 00s | Darwin Defenders | I like the idea, it's similar to my entry in some ways, but I had problems with the controls and the design. You see there is an issue when I can only shoot on one side, and enemies gen all around. I have to move to one side of the screen, wait for the bad guys to come, move to the other side of the screen, shoot at them until they get close, rinse and repeat. This isn't a fun process. It's quite slow and there is a lot of waiting. I think if you changed it so that the player could fire in different directions it would solve this problem and make your game better. Anyway just my opinion. <br/> <br/>I like your idea of adding pieces and building your ship. The evolving enemies is a cool feature too (I love GA's). |
| Aug 29 19:07:00 | 25m 00s | Evolution Game by legionth | This is awesome for your first game! You should see my first game. It was really really bad lol. Good animations. Try to keep fish and other guys near the center, they seemed to like the edges. Great job on the upgrades btw. Next I think you should work on making the character move continuously, like Mario, instead of in lock step. Also you can go here: <br/> <br/>http://www.bfxr.net/ <br/> <br/>And create some sound effects. Don't let all the buttons scare you. Just hit the buttons on the left, then export to wav and ...anyway you'll figure it out. Good work |
| Aug 29 19:30:00 | 23m 00s | Out of the Sea | It's working for me. I'm on 32 bit win7 with ahk. And wtf, I wanna be a goat lol ;) |
| Aug 29 19:44:00 | 14m 00s | Cannibal Slugmage of Eden | Bonus points for the name. It's a complicated game and without graphics it's hard to understand what is happening. I think I can see where you want to go with this game and it has potential. You just need to put more into the presentation and slowly teach people your magic system, which I understand was probably in your tutorial. |
| Aug 31 05:44:00 | 34h 00m | Prometheus | I got to the Demons and they just rolled over me. I like the changing powers and abilities. A temporary speed boost would be nice. Once a bunch of demons got close it seemed like game over, I couldn't out run them, but maybe I missed something. Good game. |
| Sep 1 03:29:00 | 21h 45m | Project Maple | I got lost a couple times but the movement and action is well done. As others have said your sound effects are good and I like the particle effects you use as well. It's fun. Nice job. |
| Sep 1 07:17:00 | 3h 48m | Influenza | Lots of fun. I finished the game. My only complaint is that the bar at the top didn't really help me understand when I could use a sneeze or anything. Fix that and you got a winner :) It's addictive. |
| Sep 2 07:31:00 | 24h 14m | evoxy | It's a very pretty and interesting game. I think you should add more crazy and interesting things to interact with. Very creative. |