Pretty dank for a short game. As a platformer, I suggest focusing on the controls since the mid-air dash would occasionally stop working which in turn led to some unfortunate deaths. Having great controls is one of the key elements of a great platformer.
Moving on to the art, not really a big fan of the title screen, though when I ponder over your description of the game which is being trapped in your own thoughts with a cloudy mind, I guess the art does somewhat fit with the overall setting.
For the in-game art it's ok, might want to refine the mid-air dash by adding some animations since it pretty much just teleports the character.
For the music, I think it just gets a bit too loud, something more subtle would suit the aesthetic of the game better.
LD42 — Running out of space (1)
OUT by joompoof 2018-08-14T02:58:07Z ♥ 1
Pretty dank for a short game. As a platformer, I suggest focusing on the controls since the mid-air dash would occasionally stop working which in turn led to some unfortunate deaths. Having great controls is one of the key elements of a great platformer.
Moving on to the art, not really a big fan of the title screen, though when I ponder over your description of the game which is being trapped in your own thoughts with a cloudy mind, I guess the art does somewhat fit with the overall setting.
For the in-game art it's ok, might want to refine the mid-air dash by adding some animations since it pretty much just teleports the character.
For the music, I think it just gets a bit too loud, something more subtle would suit the aesthetic of the game better.
BTW looking forward to SNP 8!!
Final rating: 7/10
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