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YearLDThemeGameDivisionRankOvFuInThGrAuHuMo
202353Delivery👥Big Pizza Delivery Servicejam3.373.502.754.183.433.433.063.37

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Comments by Gabu

LD53 — Delivery

Space Postal Service by bad_fetus 2023-05-02T12:52:26Z

Hey ! Great game :thumbsup: I really like the concept, it was a great idea.

Everything I say below is in my opinion.

- The spaceship is a bit hard to control, and if we touch the ground horizontally, we're stuck and cannot move anymore. [Screenshot](///raw/1cb/95/z/5a997.png)

- The music doesn't really make think of the space. Of course, you did a really great work in the short amount of time, but let me give you some ideas in case you want to improve what you did. Maybe you could have used some sin waves or other basic waveforms with delay, some really ambient pads with reverb to get a sound that really makes think to the space in my opinion.

- Also, that would have been cool to have a sound when you boost.

and rest is just about adding content c:. I didn't play every level, but some ideas for new obstacles: portals (like in Portal), lasers (that periodically activate and destroy the spaceship on touch), etc.

But otherwise, it is good. Don't stop.

Good luck for the next ones ! :thumbsup: