Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → Users → brett-kaplan
| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Co | ||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2012 | 24 | Evolution | Dr. Laser-Shooter, Or How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the Laser | compo | 734 | 2.00 | 22 |
brett-kaplan leaves an average of 5.0 feedback comments each event.
LD24 — Evolution (5)
Path of the Warrior by akovaski 2012-09-17T16:27:00
Easy to understand, so that's good. But the game seems somewhat bland, and doesn't fit the theme extremely well.
Evolve and Defend by lucars83 2012-09-17T16:23:00
The game doesn't make a lot of sense, and seems to rely too much on text.
Galapagos by espekia 2012-09-17T15:51:00
The graphics and feel of the game are nice, you did a good job of not overextending yourself.
One thing you might want to consider for the future would be to add more feedback for the player, like little animations or sounds as they interact with the game. Especially for placement games like this, making the game react immediately to actions can make it feel much more vibrant and alive. A good example of this would be World of Goo.
EVOLUTION OF AN ORGANISM by thelordpineapple 2012-08-29T21:32:00
Movement felt clunky (no diagonal movement, overly slow at times, etc.)
Watercolor Wheel Evolution by tcstyle 2012-08-29T21:26:00
While the basic concept is solid, I feel that the level gap in between colliding with something and getting the effect makes the game feel too disconnected.