samuel-hollywood-summers 2025-04-10 18:49 ♥ 0
A lovely little story with emotional impact. I love the positive spin on a dark series of events. Good stuff. The first jump forward in time, though, was a bit of a sudden jump in mood. The implied outcome of the camping scene clashed with the upbeat music choice on waking up. Something more emotionally ambiguous might suit that particular transition better, so that the reader has time to absorb what was hinted at.