c42 2020-10-05 23:07
Good writing and creative in story
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD47 → Heaven / Hell
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 2.50 | 3 | ||
| Fun | 2.50 | 3 | ||
| Innovation | 2.50 | 3 | ||
| Theme | 3.00 | 3 | ||
| Graphics | 2.50 | 3 | ||
| Audio | 2.50 | 3 | ||
| Humor | 2.50 | 3 | ||
| Mood | 2.50 | 3 |
Good writing and creative in story
Thanks for sharing this. I enjoyed the story, and the choice-driven experience. I bumped into a bug where I had to repeat the first loop twice, and the first encounter with the mysterious white figure led directly into a battle. Thanks again for a very cool take on the theme.
I liked the idea, the battle system works, the music is very nice, what I missed is interactions between objects, showing that someone was damaged, and sometimes the text box was on top of the options, I believe that in the future it can add effects and improve the polish of the game, but go ahead and dedicate yourself more and more, and you will have great results, a big hug.