flaterectomy 2020-10-06 16:25
Being aware of the plan you entered this jam with, I had a big smile on my face throughout the song. :smile: You implemented the tried-and-tested 'Intro > Verse 1 > Chorus > Verse 2 > Chorus > Bridge > Chorus' structure successfully.
Critiquing the song itself, the things that most stand out to me (outside of whether the singing was in tune :smile:): * The song has the same C/G/A/F bass loop all throughout. Variety from verse to chorus would have made it more dynamic. (This critique also applies to the drums remaining the same throughout.) * The verse melody seems to simply be following the bass notes. There are a few sections where you waver to other notes, I think, but generally it's the same note. The chorus vocal melody is a decent hook, but the verse not so much. * There are no chords. With these bass notes you have the classic I V vi IV chord structure in C major ready for the taking. * Props for the solo, I'm not even gonna critique that.
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