wolfrug 2019-10-08 09:57 ♥ 1
When you try to go to the itch.io link, it gives you this: 404.PNG Maybe adhering to the theme a bit TOO much? ;) Holding off on rating until it works!
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD45 → Start with nothing
By linzz, enterman, toyomu, kevinz, bao and rosemary
| Percentile | ||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | LD45 | Ever | |
| Overall | 2.42 | 8 | ||||
| Fun | 1.92 | 8 | ||||
| Innovation | 2.67 | 8 | ||||
| Theme | 3.50 | 8 | ||||
| Graphics | 3.17 | 8 | ||||
| Audio | 2.25 | 8 | ||||
| Mood | 2.25 | 8 | ||||
When you try to go to the itch.io link, it gives you this: 404.PNG Maybe adhering to the theme a bit TOO much? ;) Holding off on rating until it works!
@wolfrug I'm sorry for our mistake.The itch.io link is ready to use.Thank you for your visit and advice.
Right! So this is a visual novel, essentially, which is neat! About losing and regaining your sense and some very weird stuff about your step-mother and...so on. It's clear English is not your native language, which causes a number of problem, mainly making the story very hard to follow I am afraid. But the character art is nice, and the music is very moody. Perhaps if it were properly translated it would be more engaging, but good work nonetheless!
The beginning is fit the theme pretty good.I think you can remove the invalid link which can help player to find the rigth file.
For having those cute girls smiling back at you the dialog got pretty intense. Loved the way music started along with the story point. Nice work with the illustrations, the story seemed pretty ambitious! Glad I downloaded this.
