beshr-kayali 2019-10-07 19:18
Nice work! I liked reading the story and the sketches were nice and appropriate :) I'd like to see a more fleshed out version of this :)
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD45 → Primordial
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 3.16 | 8 | ||
| Fun | 2.00 | 7 | ||
| Innovation | 2.00 | 7 | ||
| Theme | 3.58 | 8 | ||
| Audio | 3.40 | 7 | ||
| Mood | 3.58 | 8 |
Nice work! I liked reading the story and the sketches were nice and appropriate :) I'd like to see a more fleshed out version of this :)
Thank you! I definitely plan to continue work on this game and will upload future builds on Itch!
Daw, it ended just as it begun. Knowing your schedule at the time, I'm pretty impressed by the final product. The story is really cool, and the writing kept me interested; however, given the lack of choices the player could make, it did feel like reading a story than a choose-your-own adventure I've come to expect in visual novels. Hope to see more from this project soon!
Nice writing and character designs! I appreciate that you chose a creation myth as the concept for your first solo game project. Feels appropriate. :milky_way:
If you decide to add more interactive elements, it feels like there's ample opportunity to allow players to take a more active role in the process of creation. The context of creating new life/planets/concepts could provide players with a variety of interesting and expressive choices to make. Either way, I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop this project in the future! :star: