strike 2016-09-02 12:44
I would have love to try your game. Screenshots look really cool. Sadly you didn't get any feedback so far and it seems like you put a lot of effort into this game. So I thought it would be good to comment. Unfortunately, the embedded version here gives this error :
404 Not Found https://storage.googleapis.com/itchio/upload2/game/82590/267338
The "Windows" link brings to itch.io where there is only a link to the OS/X build. And even there, the web version as an error (which might explain the issue here) "The author of this game has uploaded an invalid file and the game is currently unavailable."
To get web games to run on itch.io you have to make a zip file of a folder containing your game, and this folder must contain an index.html file. Make sure you game works on itch.io first.
From there to embed into the ludum dare website, itch.io provides a link that you just have to paste in your entry page. On your itch.io Dashboard page, you can click Edit on your game, then go to the Distribute tab. From this page, click on "Embed game" and you'll directly get the link to paste here.