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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Zelirman's comment | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| May 5 07:16:00 | Packing Up | ♥ 1 | The game looks really cute! I'm terrible at it though and ended up not selling any item. Art and music were well done and gameplay is understandable enough. Was a bit tedious to not have money displayed while in the shop though. | |
| May 5 07:22:46 | 6m 46s | Cow Heist: Space Delivery Mission | ♥ 3 | The game was a bit hard to play given the sometimes unfair collisions. Also took me a second before realizing you could shoot with spacebar (which wasn't in the tutorials). Loveable concept though! |
| May 5 07:41:11 | 18m 25s | Carriers | ♥ 1 | The music was really setting the mood! gameplay wise it was fine though it rapidly seemed more apparent i just needed to buy as many contracts as possible and purchase the pigeons to do it. Very fitting game for the theme well done! |
| May 5 07:47:13 | 6m 02s | Fruit Flinger | ♥ 1 | Adorable game and impressive slingshot mechanic. Felt like the map didn't need to be this big. Running back and forth to collect fruits was getting tedious as i didn't have time to reach a boat's favourite fruit most of the time. Solid base though, with a little tweaks you could already make some interesting improvements! |
| May 5 08:06:21 | 19m 08s | BOI | ♥ 3 | What a fun game! Died laughing when not only animals would stack but their names too! Atmosphere was really nailed in with the blues piano tunes and the silly SFX were well made. Honestly my favourite entry in this jam so far! Good job! |
| May 5 08:22:27 | 16m 06s | Invernal Slumber | ♥ 2 | Adorable visuals and music. Loved the concept of wall climbing but felt a bit clunky at times. This made reaching certain high platforms needlessly tedious. Good job on the game! |
| May 5 08:28:32 | 6m 05s | Sortcery | ♥ 2 | I liked the concept but give more time for the player to check each package. It was really frustrating when packages started piling up and it quickly became a mess of boxes pushing each other. The instructions are also a bit confusing at first. The stamping felt really nice though. |
| May 5 08:35:11 | 6m 39s | ANGRY DELIVERY | ♥ 1 | Solid base for a game. A bit hard to make enough money but not impossible. Good job! |
| May 5 08:48:22 | 13m 11s | MagiCat | ♥ 1 | Joining many people here in saying that the Art and Audio were fantastic! This game has a unique flair and it ties in everything together. But like others i couldn't finish any potion. I'm not sure i got the ingredients part correctly and the magic i couldn't figure out. Also the stirring felt unresponsive at times and i'm still not sure how to stir best? But a solid concept that can be refined with a simpler gameplay imo! Best of luck and good job! |
| May 5 09:29:24 | 41m 02s | Mars Delivery Program | ♥ 3 | Great game and perhaps the best one i've played so far! Music is fantastic, art is adorable and gameplay was smooth and serviceable. Only wished that boxes were a bit more spread out and not all in one place but other than that it's a top notch submission well done! |
| May 5 10:19:01 | 49m 37s | Chain Mail | ♥ 1 | Great game all round! The synergizing mechanic and terrain preference really added depth to gameplay. Art is gorgeous, music is fantastic and the text flavour was silly enough while remaining in the chosen theme! |
| May 5 10:28:19 | 9m 18s | Die-Giorno | ♥ 1 | A nice little spooky game. Short and simple but the multiple ending adds some play time. The absence of music and night sfx really adds to the atmosphere. Nice job! |
| May 5 10:51:46 | 23m 27s | Deliverance | ♥ 1 | Really cool concept! Game looks neat and pretty, the gameplay is understandable and the different checks needed add a nice depth to the concept. Switching from the 3 different view reminded me of FNAF. The music added some eariness which i'm not sure it was intended but i enjoyed it personally. I will say however that the stamping was a bit janky at times. I accidently stamped several dossiers before they even appeared because the stamp was too close to the table. Also the arrows to go back to a previous menu in the top right corner was somehow not really intuitive in my mind and i cannot tell why. Maybe my brain pictured it pointing the other direction. Overall great work! |
| May 5 11:03:18 | 11m 32s | Mouse Mail | ♥ 0 | Sweet, Short and Simple. A nice little game with cozy art and music. Maybe a smaller map and more dialogue options would have been nice but overall it was pleasant. Also for some reason, my original prompt to read the letter never left so i don't know if it's intended. Good job! |