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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | longv's comment | |
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| May 2 18:41:44 | Pizza Delivery Flying Bot | ♥ 1 | I like the idea of the game and I think I understand what it was aiming for. Of course the controls are a lot harder than usual but it wasn't impossible to control (I was able to deliver 3 pizzas xD). However, I think it still needs improvement to be more intuitive. And probably some simple story line or events would make it more interesting :) | |
| May 2 18:57:02 | 15m 18s | Drive! Express Girl! 閃耀，速達少女！ | ♥ 2 | The art is pretty awesome. Maybe some guidance in the game would be more helpful because I haven't understood the idea properly to play it through. But again, great works on your art! |
| May 2 19:07:01 | 9m 59s | Ninth live | ♥ 1 | I love the effort you've put in the art of this game :) The introduction of the gameplay is innovative also. However, I kept getting black screen. Did I miss something :D? |
| May 5 13:38:35 | 66h 31m | Birdmail | ♥ 1 | Great adoption of Tower Defense into the theme. It did give a satisfaction of playing. However, I'd expect more challenge baked into the game, like some strategic factor which the building will get destroy if you aren't fast enough 😄. |
| May 7 18:45:01 | 53h 06m | Morse Deliverer | ♥ 1 | Very funny sound effect and I like it 😄 But the game feels a little bit repetitive though. Maybe adding a few challenges would make it more interesting. For example, you can help others, who don't know Morse code (like me), learn it: give a simple sentence and make us to collect the correct syllables. Anw, great effort on your game! Always appreciate handcraft stuffs. |
| May 8 06:59:09 | 12h 14m | The Stork Purrsuit | ♥ 2 | It's a cat game so of course it will be good 😄 Anw, the graphics are nice and the gameplay has some nice puzzle as well. Here are just a few small things I notice: - The instruction sometimes overlaps the game in the top left corner. Maybe you can place it somewhere else or have it dismiss after some time. - I think in level 2 or 3, it seems that I made a wrong move and the stork caught me but I didn't see any of them around. Basically I didn't know what I've done wrong. Anw, great efforts! |
| May 8 07:52:06 | 52m 57s | Cat Delivery | ♥ 0 | Great, fun & addictive game. Probably a few more objectives could make it even more interesting :) And I needs more cats! |
| May 8 09:09:59 | 1h 17m | Congo Premiere | ♥ 1 | I'd say this is a great achievement for your first game even though you just have a few months of experience. So be proud of yourself 😄 The art is nice and the control is smooth. Maybe if you want to develop it further on, a few more objectives would be nice. |
| May 8 09:23:18 | 13m 19s | Panda Express | ♥ 2 | As @cinterre has mentioned, I didn't know why I lost at the beginning until I entered full screen mode. Hence this is one thing that can be improved (either mentioning it in the description or somehow fit them in small screen). Also, the following of the pandas can be made smoother in my opinion. But anyway, it's good game in general (and addictive 😃). Very appreciate handcraft art style. |
| May 9 07:37:14 | 22h 13m | Slalom Pizza Delivery Service | ♥ 0 | Cool game and nice art style! The control is smooth. But I think have a reset button would be nice because sometimes I got stuck in some house and it's better to restart instead of going foward (cause I lost all the money anyway 😢). Also, a few objectives or like someone in the thread mentioning Yeti chasing you would make it even more fun. |
| May 9 09:48:38 | 2h 11m | Haitatsu | ♥ 0 | The narrative of the game is quite good! One drawback is the control/animation is a little bit awkward. Also, it takes me a while to realise that I need to hold Shift + Space to jump (Space couldn't be used alone). But in general, I can see you put a lot of work in the story of the game. Great job! |