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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Fil089's comment | |
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| May 2 03:54:08 | World of My Own | ♥ 3 | Good game. Infinite small worlds fit better in the theme than I expected. If your planing on expanding this game here are some things you might consider when working on it: - Graphics: Give more feedback to the player. Flashing enemies on a jam game is acceptable but animations and stager states is an interesting idea to consider if you plan on expanding the game further. Also, better visual effects such as screen shakes and hit particles will make your player more aware of what is going on and enhance their experience. - Audio: While simple loops and basic sound effects cut for this game in this version, consider making music more of a priority when working in this title in the future. Better sound effects for hits and gunshots, enemy specific death screeches and footsteps and other small touches will enhance the player experience from "Ok, I guess..." to "This game, dude, THIS GAME IS AMAZING!!!" - Aesthetics: I know this is something dificult to judge, but hear me out for a sec, ok? There are many things you can make to expand on the concept, but I'm here to talk about what can be improved right now. First, your dungeons need some uplifting, like, literally building walls on then. I always had the sensation that if I was been locked in a room, I needed to see the walls of that room and a door from where I came from. I'm pretty sure you will want that too, and been some thing to be worked on the room generator might be scary, but it will reap the benefits of it when you see the results. Diferent graphics an animations for the bosses and grunts is the other main point. Other than that, congratulations on having finished your game in this jam. On the lookout for the evolution of this project. |