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Aug 29 16:07:00 Into the Woods nicely written, not just the prose but how you tell the story. spotted one typo at (one of?) the ending/s: "you never to me that". should be "told", i reckon.
Aug 29 20:25:00 4h 18m 1989 to 2014 great take on the theme! love it!
Sep 4 10:13:00 133h 48m Capsule grymt jobbat PaperBlurt! alltid kul att se hur du utvecklas i din användning av Twine-formatet lite mer för varje spel du gör. hur du använder humor, små absurda inslag, för att lätta upp och göra berättelsen mer underhållande är dessutom riktigt bra, även om det spårar ut lite mot slutet. men extremt spännande där ett tag, och gillade speciellt hur du fick in konsoler och annat genom animationer och transitions. <br/> <br/>några stavfel dock: <br/>"To not being _be_ alone at the same time as you approach, nay stalk, with caution." <br/> <br/>minns inte exakt vad det stod men: <br/>"Space-Decibels" - borde det inte vara "Space-disciple" med tanke på kontexten, eller är det något skämt jag inte förstår?
Sep 4 12:50:00 2h 37m TAUPE good writing and story, liked the mysterious mood.
Sep 4 13:07:00 17m 00s We Are All Connected, Musically i like this a lot. very soothing and beautiful.
Sep 4 13:21:00 14m 00s Space Breakers nice twist to the genre, and great graphics!
Sep 4 13:33:00 12m 00s Close Your Eyes amazing in every way, the best game i've played so far!
Sep 9 13:46:00 120h 13m Astroz nice game overall, a few flaws that other players have pointed out, and i especially like the graphics and concept. original and fun!
Sep 9 17:17:00 3h 31m Space Trader tested on Windows Vista and Nexus 7, and though it may not work perfectly (the tilt-controls are hard, the game is a little bit confusing) it's really cool and innovative! great take on the theme!
Sep 9 17:47:00 30m 00s Mansion on the Hill nice and short.
Sep 9 19:05:00 1h 18m RED Thread pros: <br/>+ graphics! <br/>+ those visual effects!! <br/>+ super sweet! <br/>+ design and concept!! <br/> <br/>cons: <br/>- tiring, stereotypical gender representations <br/>- too hard for me! <br/>- slippery controls <br/> <br/>great work overall!
Sep 9 21:10:00 2h 05m Starpiercer the only bad thing about this game is its lack of scoring system and that it gets a little monotonous after a while - the music, graphics and controls are simply amazing!
Sep 9 21:36:00 26m 00s Marbles fantastic, often disturbing, atmosphere! your art style is unique and very powerful, and the music works great with it. interesting and thought-provoking entry. <br/> <br/>and thanks again for playing and commenting!
Sep 11 15:25:00 41h 49m Please Hold amazing game, great writing! so frustrating and fun!
Sep 11 15:54:00 29m 00s Song of Elements good writing, i like your colorful prose. simple but good use of the theme too.
Sep 15 06:42:00 86h 48m Connecting LD30 to the Real World this is probably the coolest game this LD! just amazing!
Sep 15 06:57:00 15m 00s Omnis what an amazing graphical style!