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Dec 9 03:24:00 Kevin's uncommon story This was fun! At first it was obvious but by the end I had to try multiple times to solve the puzzle. The animation of the room when you go to the next level was very nice and definitely fits the theme. <br/> <br/>I noticed a few spelling mistakes - I think the first sentence should be "Common stories are meant to be complete." instead of "Common story's are ment to complete."
Dec 9 03:42:00 18m 00s Silk This was a fun and unique puzzle! I appreciate not having instructions but I was a little confused on the first level with both black and white tiles. It might help to introduce white in a level by itself so that its properties are revealed.
Dec 9 04:23:00 41m 00s Lull I liked this a lot! A very interesting and engaging story. I'd like to see it done with better graphics. I played it twice and I did better the second time - though it wasn't always clear how my decisions affected things.
Dec 9 04:40:00 17m 00s Rringo It looks cute but I don't understand how to find the apple or what the smoke means. I tried a few times both killing lots of people and not, and can't figure it out. The background is very nice, if you drew it.
Dec 9 04:50:00 10m 00s 1 Screen Hero This is fun and the graphics look great!
Dec 9 22:52:00 18h 02m Leaving Very cool - I finally beat it! The thing that was the most tedious was collecting coins. Maybe it would be better if the rocks always gave coins (or some other prize) instead of sometimes being empty. Also I noticed a bug or type where I was talking to Lucien and he said that he had just talked to Lucien. Anyway, great job - you made a pretty long game that kept me interested the whole time. Solving it takes a good mix of actually making connections and just trying stuff out.
Dec 15 23:04:00 144h 12m SUPER FUN FAMILY PRIMETIME TELEVISION SIMULATOR This is great. I played once trying to get a good score and then once just to flip through the channels.
Dec 17 20:44:00 45h 40m The Broadenlands Amazing! It was very easy but so cute and unique. The costume seems like a reference to Where The Wild Things Are - very nice. The mechanic of going around the bed is a great interpretation of the theme and I enjoyed all the environments (such as the different interpretation of the ball/snowball/skull). Keep up the good work! My only recommendation is that you get someone to help you proofread the dialogue since there are a lot of spelling and grammar errors.